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The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, Perhaps there is a working position for me in your
library
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. My name is Munisa Khamrayeva. I am currently studying at the Faculty of Philosophy of Samarqand State University.
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, I have a good ability that computer using and IT field.
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 is the reason, I am writing to you about the possibility of working in your
library
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. Before I entered university I learned the IT field. And I have a certificate for it. I took it during my studying. So I think my certificate can use for my work in your
library
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. Because you mentioned in your seeking applications that ,We just need one person that he or she able the computer using an IT field.
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 why I want to work in your
library
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 and at
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 time I need a job to make money . Because my family's condition is bad and they do not enough money for supplies me with it .
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 is the reason, I must job of helping them. I hope that you will be kind enough to consider my application. Yours faithfully, .......... Khamrayeva Munisa
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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