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On a recent holiday you lost avaluable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: -describe the item you lost -explain how you lost it -tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

#holiday #avaluable #item #travel #insurance #cost #manager #company #-describe #-explain #-tell
Dear Manager, I am writing
this
 letter to request you to help. on a recent
holiday
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,holiday
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 I lost my
avaluable
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valuable
 thing
that
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apply
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my
passport
. You know it is the most significant item to everyone. I had my purse on a holiday. It has some money and my
passport
. For
this
reason
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,reason
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 I need to inform you
my
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of my
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 issue to
resolve
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itresolve
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. On a holiday I went to the zoo. It was completely overcrowded. I think that when I was in the zoo I lost my purse. Because when I was at the end of the zoo I found that I had no my
passport
. I would certainly be interested in hearing from you soon. I think that you can help me. I respectfully request that help me to find my purse and especially my
passport
. I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction. If you need any other details, please feel free to write
me
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. Yours faithfully, Dream girl Rashidova S
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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