Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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among
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employees and even
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employers. Some people prefer to spend all their working life in the same place while others totally disagree. Both of them have advantages and that
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will be discussed in
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essay. Let’s start with those who don’t like to change their workplace. From their point, they adopt
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more comfortable where they have been working, but
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it enables them to innovative and provide the best that they have.
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started her job
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10 years and she is still working there owing to staying in her comfort zone.
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are looking for individuals who have spent most of their time in the same company or organization due to the fact that they can rely on them and grow up together.
On the other hand
, many people prefer to change their environment to get more
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and learn new things or even learn methods of thinking so that it helps them to find solutions to whatever they will face.
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, my sister keeps changing her job from
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to another. She opines that
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place means
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ability
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and new skills. And
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, many employers are seeking to hire employees who have worked in different places, for their ability to work in sophisticated circumstances and
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of personal
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. To sum up, determining which is the best approach to work in your whole working life depends on you and what
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and
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you to stay motivated and creative to do your work as you want and
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with, whether working in the same or
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it regularly.
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  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
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  • seniority
  • job satisfaction
  • rapidly changing job market
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  • adaptability
  • career aspirations
  • dynamic nature
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