Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
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the
employers. Some people prefer to spend all their working life in the same place while others totally disagree. Both of them have advantages and that Correct article usage
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Let’s start with those who don’t like to change their workplace. From their point, they adopt this
situation and not only fell
more comfortable where they have been working, but Correct your spelling
feel
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it enables them to innovative and provide the best that they have. For example
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10 years and she is still working there owing to staying in her comfort zone. Change preposition
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In addition
to the employees, many employers when they are hiring, they
are looking for individuals who have spent most of their time in the same company or organization due to the fact that they can rely on them and grow up together.
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On the other hand
, many people prefer to change their environment to get more benefit
and learn new things or even learn methods of thinking so that it helps them to find solutions to whatever they will face. Fix the agreement mistake
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For instance
, my sister keeps changing her job from time
to another. She opines that Correct pronoun usage
one time
new
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the new
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, many employers are seeking to hire employees who have worked in different places, for their ability to work in sophisticated circumstances and rang
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