Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.-How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

It is common to see workers

such

as teachers, nurses,

doctors

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receive a minimum

salary

,

although

they carry out a very important

job

, with

many

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any

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responsibility

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responsibilities

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. On the other

hands

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hand

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is common as well to see actors or football players earn a very high

salary

, without carrying out a

job

that is

fundamental for the development of

the

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society. In

this

essay, I will express my

agree

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about

this

statement and will look for some methods, on the

basis

of which, take a decision on how persons should be paid.

To begin

with, I totally agree with the affirmation that some workers are paid more

then

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the

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others,

furthermore

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this

doesn’t depend on the responsibility that a worker has in his

job

, but I think that it depends on how

many

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money it can bring to a society with his visibility and audience.

This

is the reason why actors and players are paid more, compared to a teacher or a doctor.

For instance

, comparing the

salary

of a teacher with the

salary

of Shakira, it is easy to see the inequality. A teacher has

lot

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of responsibilities, as he has to teach

to

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future workers,

instead

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Shakira has a good voice and a lot of visibility, but not the

responsibilities

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responsibility

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to educate another person.

Nevertheless

, she brings for sure more money to

a

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the

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country, so she earns more. I can find another example

for

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this

issue in working as

carpenter

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a carpenter

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. He has a lot of things to take care

about

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it

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, starting from the safe of

the

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other people, but for sure he earns less than

a

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actor. Keeping

this

example in mind, I would like to express some conditions on the

basis

of which choose how to pay a worker. According to me,

a

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work should be waged on the

basis

of

responsibility

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the responsibility

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that he has and on

basis

of his and the

other

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others

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safe.

For example

, a bricklayer can even risk his life during his time shift. In conclusion, I believe that the

salary

should be revisioned and pay more who risks or has more responsibilities than

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those who

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has

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more fun than thoughts in

his

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their

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job

.