Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.-How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

It is common to see workers

such

as teachers, nurses, and doctors receive a minimum

salary

,

although

they carry out a very important

job

, with a

lot

of

responsibility

.

On the other hand

is common as well to see actors or football players earn a very high

salary

, without carrying out a

job

that is

fundamental for the development of society. In

this

essay, I will express my agreement with

this

statement and will look for some methods, on the

basis

of which, to take a decision on how people should be paid.

To begin

with, I totally agree with the affirmation that some workers are paid more than others,

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this

doesn’t depend on the

responsibility

that a worker has in his

job

, but I think that it depends on how much money it can bring to a society with his visibility and audience.

This

is the reason why actors and players are paid more, compared to a teacher or a doctor.

For instance

, comparing the

salary

of a teacher with the

salary

of Shakira, it is easy to see the inequality. A teacher has a

lot

of responsibilities, as he has to teach future workers,

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instead

Shakira has a good voice and a

lot

of visibility, but not the

responsibility

to educate another person.

Nevertheless

, she brings for sure more money to the country, so she earns more. I can find another example of

this

issue in working as a carpenter. He has a

lot

of things to take care of, starting from the safe of other people, but for sure he earns less than an actor.  Keeping

this

example in mind, I would like to express some conditions on the

basis

of which choose how to pay a worker. According to me, work should be waged on the

basis

of the

responsibility

that he has and on

basis

of his and the other's safety.

For example

, a bricklayer can even risk his life during his time shift. In conclusion, I believe that the

salary

should be revisioned and pay more who risks or has more responsibilities than those who have more fun than thoughts in their

job

.