Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.-How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

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as teachers, nurses, and doctors receive a minimum

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they carry out a very important

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, with a

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of

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is common as well to see actors or football players earn a very high

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fundamental for the development of society. In

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essay, I will express my agreement with

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statement and will look for some methods, on the

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of which, to take a decision on how people should be paid.

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with, I totally agree with the affirmation that some workers are paid more than others,

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doesn’t depend on the

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that a worker has in his

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, but I think that it depends on how much money it can bring to a society with his visibility and audience.

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is the reason why actors and players are paid more, compared to a teacher or a doctor.

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, comparing the

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of a teacher with the

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of Shakira, it is easy to see the inequality. A teacher has a

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of responsibilities, as he has to teach future workers,

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Shakira has a good voice and a

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of visibility, but not the

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to educate another person.

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, she brings for sure more money to the country, so she earns more. I can find another example of

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issue in working as a carpenter. He has a

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of things to take care of, starting from the safe of other people, but for sure he earns less than an actor.  Keeping

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example in mind, I would like to express some conditions on the

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of which choose how to pay a worker. According to me, work should be waged on the

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of the

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that he has and on

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of his and the other's safety.

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, a bricklayer can even risk his life during his time shift. In conclusion, I believe that the

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should be revisioned and pay more who risks or has more responsibilities than those who have more fun than thoughts in their

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