In the interest of maintaining local culture, governments should support projects such as local film industries in order to offer alternatives to mass produced culture, such as Hollywood. How important is it to preserve traditional cultures in the face of globalization and in what ways can it be achieved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Preserving local

tradition

and spirit is very important for communities, especially for younger generations. Keeping

tradition

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of the place where they grown is mandatory for building

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personal identity. I agree that filming movies in small local industries could contribute to

this

cause,

in contrast

to large productions (like Hollywood), which value only profit.

Nowdays

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, when we have very emphasized globalization, younger people very often ignore or forget their roots. All kind

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and content is very easily

accesible

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accessible

thanks to

internet

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and social media, so they can meet different trends from all around the world. Being exposed to

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amount of available information can make one totally uninterested in things that she sees daily, so she doesn't have

motivation

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to try to understand those things and

this

is probably the main reason

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dying of local traditions. Under the influence of strong marketing strategies of large world film production companies, people tend to prefer Hollywood films over

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films filmed in local film industries. While Hollywood movies usually do not reflect any cultural or moral values,

cinematography

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in local communities could make

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difference in

this

matter. With more financial support, they could make films or documentaries to explain different traditions and local culture that would bring those themes close to

younger

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population

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is the most important factor in preserving these. Through my childhood and younger age, I found our local traditions very boring

beocause

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because

be cause

I haven't understood their meaning.

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instance

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we have

tradition

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a tradition

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of

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lightning

huge

pile

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of wood in the middle of summer that required all village residents to gather and stay there while

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is gone. As I child, I despite that

tradition

and could not wait until it is pass. Eventually, I saw

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interested

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documentary film explaining that

tradition

that began 3000-4000 years ago in our region. Local tribes

belived

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believed

believe

that

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from fire

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them from evil spirits, so they would gather around it and

triing

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trying

to get as much of its energy as

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it

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possible. After acknowledgement of that interesting story, that event became one of my

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.