The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.”

in recent times, the number of overweight

children

in western slightly increased in the

last

decade.

this

is

causes

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from

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bad habits in life and it has

danger

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effect

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effects

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for

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the

body

. it is true that the number of overweight is caused

from

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their habits

such

as often

eat

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eating

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junkfood

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junk food

. nowadays, there

are

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a lot of various

meal

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meals

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from

any

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many

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sources are serving in the restaurant. the

children

can get their

meal

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easily based on their

want

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.

for example

, the kids in elementary school is a big

fans

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from

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the burger

a burger

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burger

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burgers

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, ice cream, and soda that usually serves in

fastfood

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fast food

restaurant

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restaurants

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such

as KFC and Mc Donalds. these foods

has

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a lot of fat than the good

nutritions

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nutrition

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for the

body

.

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fat has a negative

effect

for

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the

body

such

as increasing

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body

weight.

in addition

,

bad

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a bad

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habit

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habits

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apply

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children

not only often eat junk food but

also

less do

some

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exercise to keeping their healthy.

as a result

, there are a lot of negative effects from these bad habits

their

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become overweight and difficult to reduce

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weight. depending on

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situation,

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overweight kids have a high risk of dangerous

illness

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illnesses

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such

as heart

attack

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attacks

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.

moreover

, the fatty

body

can

reducing

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energy fastly. in that case,

this

situation can

effect

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their

performence

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performance

in

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school and get

low

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score

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in the lesson. in a nutshell,

overweight

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is a big serious for

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children

that increased year by year.

this situations

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will be increasing in the future if the development of fast foodstuff

not

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balanced with the improvement of sports.

as a result

, it can bring a negative

effect

such

as decreasing the

peformence

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performance

and increasing the high risk

from

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dangerous sicknesses.