The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.”

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in recent times, the number of overweight
children
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in western slightly increased in the
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decade.
this
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from
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bad habits in life and it has
danger
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effect
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effects
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for
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the
body
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. it is true that the number of overweight is caused
from
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their habits
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as often
eat
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junkfood
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junk food
. nowadays, there
are
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a lot of various
meal
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from
any
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sources are serving in the restaurant. the
children
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can get their
meal
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easily based on their
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.
for example
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, the kids in elementary school is a big
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from
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the burger
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burger
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burgers
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, ice cream, and soda that usually serves in
fastfood
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fast food
restaurant
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such
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as KFC and Mc Donalds. these foods
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a lot of fat than the good
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nutrition
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for the
body
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.
the
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fat has a negative
effect
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for
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the
body
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as increasing
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body
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weight.
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,
bad
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habit
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habits
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children
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not only often eat junk food but
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less do
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exercise to keeping their healthy.
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, there are a lot of negative effects from these bad habits
their
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become overweight and difficult to reduce
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weight. depending on
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situation,
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overweight kids have a high risk of dangerous
illness
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illnesses
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such
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as heart
attack
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attacks
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.
moreover
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, the fatty
body
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can
reducing
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energy fastly. in that case,
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situation can
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effect
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their
performence
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performance
in
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school and get
low
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score
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scores
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in the lesson. in a nutshell,
overweight
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being overweight
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is a big serious for
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children
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that increased year by year.
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this situations
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will be increasing in the future if the development of fast foodstuff
not
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balanced with the improvement of sports.
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, it can bring a negative
effect
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such
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as decreasing the
peformence
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performance
and increasing the high risk
from
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dangerous sicknesses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overweight
  • obesity
  • caloric intake
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • screen time
  • physical education
  • nutritious
  • psychological well-being
  • self-esteem
  • socioeconomic
  • healthcare system
  • life expectancy
  • obesity-related complications
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