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The diagram illustrates information about the changes in the rates of fast food consumption by the youth in Australia over a period of 3 decades. Overall, there is an increasing trend in the number of
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 fish, chips and hamburgers are eaten, whereas the graph for pizza consumption is declining.
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 with, the eating of fish and chips started highly at 100
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 in 1975.
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 figure dropped slowly to nearly 80
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 per year in 1980 but recovered slightly to roughly 95 in the
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 5 years. From
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 on, a steady decrease can be observed until the lowest amount of just under 40
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 in 2000.
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, the plottings for the manner in which Australian teenagers ate pizza and hamburgers are similar,
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 the figures for the latter are slightly higher. They both begin below 20
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 in 1975. The line for hamburgers experienced a sharp rise to approximately 85
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 in 1985. It
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 rises more steadily in the following years, before remaining constant at the peak of 100 in the
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 half a decade. Contrary, pizza recorded a gradual rise from 1975 (the year the least consumption rate for all fast foods was recorded) until 1995, but in the
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 years of the review was
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 constant at 100
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, the summit for all the products.
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