Some people believe women are better leaders than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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the
man
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people females are better
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than males. In my opinion, I believe they not only
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at leading but
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many areas.
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great at decisiveness. Scientific studies reveal that
woman
is more intelligent than
man
. Nowadays, women not only take care of the house but
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work
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offices. In
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world,
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giant company's founder is
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as well. If we check the history of the
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, managing and running
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company
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people will be extremely impressed by their performance over
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time.
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, MamaEarth founder
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Ghazal has taken her company to the global level, and she
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takes
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care of her family on her own. She had spoken in an interview that she
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took
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a plethora of stupendous decisions to reach
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this
point. Today's
woman
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can function equally as compared to
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. Even they are great at cost-cutting whatever the situation may be. They always know how to resolve the issue
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less amount of money. Even if we leave the household
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to the
man
, they won't be able to handle the home as mothers do.
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, my mother is magnificent in her skills, she always amazes me while shopping the groceries, vegetables and other essentials
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a little
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of prices by bargaining. In conclusion,
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woman
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would definitely perform great in leadership than
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men
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. I
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