The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: - A brief introduction of yourself - Your experience and relevant skills - Why you want the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Madam Cruz, I am writing in response to the ad posted on the campus bulletin board regarding a job for

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coming summer break. I heard that one of your staff will be away for the summer break and you are looking for someone who can temporarily replace her. By the way, I am a Bussiness Management student in my junior year and I have been a student on

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campus since my secondary level. Starting from my freshmen year, I have been a working student in the Engineering department specifically in the computer laboratories. I dealt with students' inquiries and assisted the professors and students during their hands-on or practical exercises. I believe that with

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experience, I am suited for the role.

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, if ever I will be accepted for the job,

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would be a great help for me financially. And

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will be a great opportunity for me to learn new skills and enhance my interpersonal skills. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience and if you wish to

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discuss my qualifications, I am available from Monday-Friday 1:00-5:00 PM. Yours sincerely, Ana Smith

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

193 words

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