The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However, some sat that young people can also take the lead of organizations or companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent generations, there
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a global trend about older people being the chief executive officer in an organization, I completely agree with
this
decision because they are more exposed to and experienced in the game than youngsters.
To begin
with, the aged generation has been in control for ages before handing over to the next person capable of that duty and
this
is because most of them are the original source of ideas and most likely to know about the pros and cons of running a company
due to
their years of experiences,
consequently
leading to the growth and productivity in the business.
For example
, Aliko Dangote- the richest man in Africa, over the years he has been able to manage different businesses
such
as Dangote cement, rice, salt,
spaghetti
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and even one of the biggest refineries in the whole of Africa is owned by him.
However
, in doing
this
, he employed the younger generation so they
can
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learn and be inspired to develop their own company.
Thus
, being experienced is one of the major attributes of businessmen .
In addition
, some individuals may argue that younger people are more advanced
due to
technology and know the current trends but
this
should not always be the case. In the days of our forefathers when there was no technology businesses were still growing and now they have been exposed to various ways of increasing the growth of the company.
For instance
, J K Rowling's-who the director and writer of the famous movie Harry Potter, was rejected several
due to
incompetence before
finally
being accepted and the movie became a global trend for years.
In other words
, the rejection made her exposed to the different methods that can improve the quality of the film.
Therefore
, exposure to certain businesses can build someone's trust, confidence and intelligent ideas which are needed in any organization. In conclusion, elderly people should be in charge of an organization,
whereas
juveniles can be employed so as to know the current trends and
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learn more skills and ideas from their superiors.
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