Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take an interest in the arts?

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crafts, which is a growing concern, while a remainder

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focused

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concentrating on other fields

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, technology, and business. The absence of

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employability for creatives as a business is the

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tendency. To be more exact, art has traditionally been seen as a hobby rather than a primary occupation that may provide individuals with sufficient income to support themselves. Drawing, ballet, and music are just a few examples of fine art cultures that are always viewed as pastimes that

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may take up after work to unwind and reduce anxiety.

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trend has increasingly challenged artistic talent away from the corporate world. The best method for the government to boost enthusiasm for the arts is by raising awareness among

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youngsters.

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issue can be resolved by providing performers with a greater salary or by giving them more job opportunities via the government. Numerous performers have advanced

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world-class show in Paris; for illustration, one of my friends,

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Neo , a well-known painter, received a souvenir as a sign of appreciation. He was able to build an online training

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to educate many more adolescents due to that recognition, as well as to make money to support himself. In conclusion,

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art is seen as a fundamental component of many cultures, the vast majority of people continue to choose other fields,

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as nanotechnology, for their professional backgrounds. The problem of unemployment in society is a major contributing factor to

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situation.

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issue and promote interest in the arts.