The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps presented describe the current situation and future projections
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the
university
's
sports
center
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. Currently, the
university
sports
center
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contains only one indoor swimming pool and two
sports
areas
,
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but will be redeveloped with the addition of a leisure pool on the west side and an extension of the gym to the east, install
dance
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studio. We plan to remove the outdoor courts on the east and west sides, create a
sports
hall to replace the courts,
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a sport
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sport
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hall
university
students are able to enjoy various
sports
, and increase two more changing rooms, which were inconvenient because there was only one, to provide more convenient public spaces.
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, a
sports
shop, cafe, and reception etc will be built so that college students can use more entertainment spaces.
This
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center
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will include more public spaces, entertainment facilities, and
sports
facilities in the future to build a more convenient and friendly
sports
center
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and provide services to
university
students.
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