A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the job opening in reference to the advertisement you placed in the Vancouver Observer for waiters and waitresses. I am 19 years old and I am a part-time student at college. I have completed and passed the advanced certificate in food hygiene. As the restaurant where I am currently employed is due to close, I am keen to find another position as soon as possible. I have held several positions in catering outlets during my studies.

Therefore

, I am familiar with the requirements of working in the catering industry. In my current job,

in addition

to working as a waiter, I am

also

responsible for counting up takings at the end of the day. I am very reliable and trustworthy, have a friendly, outgoing personality and enjoy dealing with the public.

This

restaurant is close to my house and within walking distance. So, I can give you my flexible schedule because I have only two-day of college in the evening time and I am comfortable doing morning, evening and night shifts. I am available for an interview at any time except Monday and Wednesday evenings when I attend college. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rubina Gill

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8 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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