These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, youngsters' attitudes are impacted due to inclining the violence on

television

. In my point of view, I firmly concur with the former proposition of

this

argument.

Thus

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essay will elaborate on reasons in the ensuing paragraphs, which

further

leads to a logical conclusion.

Firstly

, all news channels propagate negative news throughout the day especially riots between religions.

Hence

youth will take the wrong path due to continuous broadcasting on

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television

.

For example

,

last

year in the Delhi riots many youths were participating.

In addition

, It will show the major effect on their studies and

also

on their brotherhood.

Secondly

, in today's

world

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many violent series were telecasting on

television

like money heists,

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and scared

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scared

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games, and these are very much popular among younglings. To elaborate, these stories will showcase how

easy

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people can earn money by doing wrong things like murder, robbery and kidnapping.

For Instance

, in 2022 a group of children inspired by the money heist series

,

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went for a bank robbery.

Furthermore

, adolescents are creating shortcuts for getting success in their careers. To sum up, violence

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on

television

are

incling

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including

due to

this

it affects young

adult's

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attitude. Government should issue strict rules to the media to broadcast negativity and parents

also

take responsibility to give advice to their children.