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You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services

#country #business #trip #flight #didn’t #services #airport #manager #improvements
Dear Airport Manager I was a customer
in
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on
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 Flight 301 from Australia to Canada
last
sunday
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Sunday
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. I am not happy with
travelling
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the travelling
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 experience
due to
 the terrible service and
food
. It was really dark when I got to
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the airplant
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airplant
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aeroplane
 and nobody lead me to my seat. and
also
 I was served lunch and dinner during
flight
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the flight
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 but the
food
 was cold and the box was broken. I highly suggest the staff on
airplant
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aeroplanes
 need to have more professional training and
food
 reheating equipment
such
 as
micro-wave
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microwave
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 oven need to be checked well before every
treval
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travel
. There is no doubt that
safty
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safety
 and hot
food
 is important for any
customers
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customer
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. Hope these problems can be solved well. kind regard
tim
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Tim
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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