You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services

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Dear Airport Manager I was a customer
in
Change preposition
on

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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Flight 301 from Australia to Canada
last
Linking Words

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sunday
Change the capitalization
Sunday

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. I am not happy with
travelling
Correct article usage
the travelling

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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experience
due to
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

the terrible service and
food
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

. It was really dark when I got to
Correct article usage
the airplant

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airplant
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aeroplane

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and nobody lead me to my seat. and
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

I was served lunch and dinner during
flight
Add an article
the flight
a flight

The noun phrase flight seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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but the
food
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was cold and the box was broken. I highly suggest the staff on
airplant
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aeroplanes

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need to have more professional training and
food
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reheating equipment
such
Linking Words

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micro-wave
Correct your spelling
microwave

The word micro-wave doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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oven need to be checked well before every
treval
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travel

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. There is no doubt that
safty
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safety

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and hot
food
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

is important for any
customers
Fix the agreement mistake
customer

It seems that customers may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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. Hope these problems can be solved well. kind regard
tim
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Tim

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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