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You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

#member #organisation #restaurant #manager #service #group
Dear sir, Myself
sowjanya
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sow any
. The reason for writing
this
 letter was I am
the
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a
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 regular visitor of your restaurant and involve in different meetings which
is
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are
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 organised by our company
beacuse
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because
 in your
cusaine
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cuisine
 there are lots of multinational food dinings. Yesterday, I was very unsatisfied with your food and
behaviour
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the behaviour
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 of your staff. Let me explain
indetail
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in detail
, before
day
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the day
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 we are decided to attend some important concepts in
eating
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the eating
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 place with
a lots
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lots
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 of joy and
funfull
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fun full
 discussions.
However
, we confirmed the table and gathered there at
preferred
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a preferred
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 time and waited outside for an hour. Whenever
,
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apply
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 we are inside and ordered some best
recepies
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recipes
 from
chinese
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Chinese
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 and
italian
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Italian
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. As long as it is late, not good in taste and getting a bad smell.
furthermore
, I intimated to your staff that the dish is not fresh at the time he is
argueing
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arguing
at
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with
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 me for the item
with
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in
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 a rude manner. In
this
 letter I request you change the members of your
dine
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dining
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 or teach them to be
respect
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respectful
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 towards customers and provide
a good and healthy food
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good and healthy food
a portion of good and healthy food
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.
This
 will help you to return us to dine at your restaurant. thanking you.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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