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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

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It is certainly true that
video
games
 have become one of the most important leisure activities over the
last
 decade;
however
, some people think
it
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 may have a negative effect on users, in
this
 essay I will discuss the negative and positive aspects of it and I'll argue that it has far more significant drawbacks. The main benefit of it being a fun activity, some people, especially children tend to use it to relax after they are done with their homework, and even parents use
video
games
 as a rewarding tool to their kids for behaving well and getting high grades.
Moreover
, it can be educational too, some institutions of education all over the world already started using computer
games
 as a tool
of
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for
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 teaching younger children some of the basics like
alphabet
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 and vocabulary and it has been proven that it is more effective than traditional teaching methods. Despite the obvious appeal, there are several disadvantages
of
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to
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 using it. First of all, some
video
games
 have more complicated missions;
therefore
, users of all ages tend to spend hours trying to solve them rather than doing more important tasks.
Thus
, computer
games
 can be a
real time-waster
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.
In addition
, there is arising new addiction
of
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to
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video
games
, it was reported in several developed countries about individuals who spend more than 24 hours
in
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just playing and
as a result
, their health got
effected
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affected
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 badly. In conclusion, I would argue that the drawbacks of
video
games
 are superior to
its
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 benefits.
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