The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart reveals the five different
items
of one country's exports in the years of
2015 and 2016. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, the given table compared the proportion of these items
.
Overall
, as can be seen from the chart, although
three items
(petroleum
products
, engineered goods
, textiles) saw a slight increase during the next year, in 2016 compared to two others, petroleum
products
were the powerful
Correct quantifier usage
most powerful
items
of exports. Furthermore
, the value of all the
five factors had been rose in 2016 Correct article usage
apply
instead
of gems
and jewellery
.
In 2015, just petroleum
products
were earned above 60 billions
and Change to singular
billion
this
amount growth
Replace the word
grew
partialy
in 2016. Correct your spelling
partially
On the other hand
, engineered goods
, gems
and jewellery
, and textiles saw a minimal rise between 2015 and 2016 as well, while
just engineered goods
were
earned above 60 Unnecessary verb
apply
billions
just like Change to singular
billion
petroleum
products
. In contrast
, gems
and jewellery
were bring
about 44 Change the verb form
were brought
billions
in 2015Change to singular
billion
,
but fell down minimally in 2016. Remove the comma
apply
Additionally
, agricultural products
remained stable.
According to
the table, all categories were
increased in value from 2015 to 2016, except for Unnecessary verb
apply
gems
and jewellery
. Textiles with a significant increase with
15.24% were in the first stage, and engineered Change preposition
of
goods
and petroleum
products
were in second
level with 8.5% and 3% respectively.Add an article
the second
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Vocabulary: Replace the words items, petroleum, products, goods, gems, jewellery with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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