The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the vacancy that you are looking for a relevant candidate for during the summer holiday. My name is Malik.I am studying at Harvard University in the field of electrical engineering.Currently,I am about to finish my tertiary education. I would like to give information with respect to my experience.I have worked at one of the most popular restaurants for 1 year.

This

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job helped me so much in order to refine my communication ability.

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,I am a multilingual person.I can talk and read in several languages

such

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as English,Spanish and Deutch. The reason why I am interested in applying for

this

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position is that my father has been fired from his job recently,

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,in order to fulfil my basic requirements I am forced to earn money

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I have made up my mind to help my family financially. If you require any

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information please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.

malikli.malik1995

Jan 29, 2023

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