The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The
University
of Riverview received the highest
number
of
students
from all
the
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five countries. The highest
number
being
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just above 7000 and the least being slightly above 1000. Colombia sent out the lowest
number
of
students
to all the universities, they did send around a thousand
students
in
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each
university
. Nepal registered 4000
Students
in
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both Earlwood
University
and Smithtown
University
.
Additionally
, Indonesia registered the same amount of
students
at the same universities,
that is
10000
students
.
However
, India, Vietnam and Colombia registered
different
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number
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of
students
to
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the three universities. Smithtown
University
received the lowest
number
of
students
of not same as Earlwood
University
ranging between 6000
students
and under 1000
students
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolment trends
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating enrolments
  • international student numbers
  • comparative analysis
  • favored choice
  • global economic conditions
  • admission policies
  • program offerings
  • student satisfaction
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