The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The
University
of Riverview received the highest number
of students
from all the
five countries. The highest Correct article usage
apply
number
being
just above 7000 and the least being slightly above 1000. Colombia sent out the lowest Change the form of the verb
is
number
of students
to all the universities, they did send around a thousand students
in
each Change preposition
to
university
.
Nepal registered 4000 Students
in
both Earlwood Change preposition
at
University
and Smithtown University
. Additionally
, Indonesia registered the same amount of students
at the same universities, that is
10000 students
.
However
, India, Vietnam and Colombia registered different
Change the article
a different
the different
number
of Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
students
to
the three universities.
Smithtown Change preposition
at
University
received the lowest number
of students
of not same as Earlwood University
ranging between 6000 students
and under 1000 students
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