The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting & reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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In data shows statistics for the year 2010, tell about the percentage of Australian males and females' daily sports activity in various life stages. The shows the change in form of a bar graph. The data tell the trend of youngsters, teenagers, adults and senior citizens.
The bar graph depicts, that girl's in the range of 15 to 24 i.e. 47.7% contributors,
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boys were 52.8% i.e. boys are approximately 5% higher than girls. Linking Words
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into the category i.e. 65 and ,over there was a slight difference of only 0.4%. When we consider the segment of people that runs between the age of mid-twenties to mid-sixties, where women are leading the show in terms of daily workouts, in ,contrast men lag behind.
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the portion of women was persistently progressive as age segments increased except for the range of above 65. Linking Words
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, the portion of adult boys was quite fluctuating. Linking Words
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, the range of 15 to 24 holds the highest portion and from the age group of 25 to 64 the data shows inconsistency.
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To sum up
, that females are found to be more persistent in their morning active routine when than men in society. The Linking Words
overall
trend shows women are more enthusiastic towards regular workouts in comparison to malesLinking Words
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