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You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently noticed a job advertisement in a local newspaper for the sales executive position in the City Museum shop. I would like to apply for the post of
part-time
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 employee during the summer holidays. I am hoping that you would consider my candidacy for the post and give me a chance to discuss it
further
 in a formal interview. I have completed my graduation in accounting and have sound knowledge of customer care.
Besides
, I have two years of experience as a front desk officer in a telecom company. As I will be free during the summer vacation, I would like to work for your museum shop that primarily sells antique items, books, journals and souvenirs. I am quite confident that I would be a valuable asset to your team. The reason for applying for
this
 position is to work in a post
that is
 equally challenging and rewarding. At the same time, I will be able to meet people from diverse cultures and regions.
This
 would definitely make my holidays meaningful and exciting. I look forward to meeting you soon. Yours faithfully, Shanthy Devi
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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