You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the broken air conditioner of a bedroom which I planned to stay one week in your hotel.
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summer I planned to enjoy seven days at Coast Beach,
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reason
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I booked a room at your establishment. Unfortunately, the cooling system would not run properly and because of
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issue
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the feeling was that it was warmer inside than outside the door.
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situation was noticed by me and the receptionist who communicated the unavailability of a free bedroom
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offer. There was no option to find another place to stay
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I went on the same day to a hostel.
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movement, caused me an extra cost of $350 as all accommodations were booked and the only one available had high prices.
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reason, I am requiring reimbursement of what I paid for you plus
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extra. I hope you appreciate my request as I am prepared to forgo all the inconvenience caused by
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matter. I look forward to hearing your prompt response, Yours faithfully, Pollyanna Souza
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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