The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts compare the sources of
electricity
in New
Zealand
and
Germany
in the years 1980 and 2010. Between these years,
electricity
generation almost doubled, rising from 127
units
to 200 in New
Zealand
, and from 107 to 214
units
in
Germany
. In 1980 New
Zealand
used coal as the main
electricity
source
(56) and the remainder was produced from had become the fuel for more than 75% of
electricity
produced and only hydro continued to be another significant
source
supplying approximately 20%.
In contrast
,
Germany
used coal as a
source
of only 28
units
of
electricity
in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 49
units
were produced largely from petroleum and nuclear power, with hydro contributing only 7
units
. But by 2010 nuclear power, which was not used at all in New
Zealand
, had developed into the main
source
, producing almost 75% of
electricity
, at 155
units
,
while
coal and petroleum together produced only 55
units
. Other sources were no longer significant.
Overall
, it is clear by 2010 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: New
Zealand
relied on coal and
Germany
on nuclear power.
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