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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.
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graph
 illustrates
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proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.
overall
,
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each
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 shows various features. In the case of children,
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the percentage
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 of children who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day was the least in every
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, the
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 was approximately 13% in 2001,
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figure
 remained stable from 2001 to 2003.
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, the
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proportion
promotion
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proportion
was
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dramatically went up to roughly 25% in 2007,
it
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and it
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 reached to peak, the
figure
 decreased to 23% in 2008, When it comes to women, the
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 of them was the highest
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 every
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, the
figure
 continuously rose from about 22% in 2001 to about 33% in 2006.
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, the
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percentage
percentages
also
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dropped
 to 30% in 2008.
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of men
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, the
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percentage
 of them remained
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steadily
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 from 2001 to 2003, the
figure
 was about 17%, the largest
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 was 27% in 2006 and in 2007. In conclusion,
every
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category
 was that the highest
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 peaked
at
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in 2006.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 92%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words category, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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