FUTURE JOB, WHY I WANT TO BECOME A KINDERGARTEN TEACHER

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As it is rightly said,

that

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the

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teacher

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plays a crucial role in

student’s

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a student’s

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life… especially in

pre primary

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pre-primary

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children’s life,

teacher

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is everything

for

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the child. As we can see there

are

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n number of

courses

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for becoming

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teacher

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a teacher

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, as we go higher and higher the

courses

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keeps on coming for the

teachers

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to set

best

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future for the upcoming geniuses and the gems of our country. Earlier

their

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there

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was only one

course

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for

teachers

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that

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was B.ed. if you are qualified with

B.ed

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a B.ed

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qualification you can become a

teacher

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. But now it is not like that… for

pre

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pre-primary

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primary

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,primary

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we have

Diploma

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courses

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in Early

Childhood

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Care and

Education

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, for the primary

teachers

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we have

Diploma

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courses

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Education

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, for higher grades we have Bachelor

courses

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for

education

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then

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masters

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and it goes on and on as it is

never ending

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. For polishing the future we

teachers

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are supposed to be

upto

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up to

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the date with current information. I was not aware of

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this

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these

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courses

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as I was from

commerce

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the commerce

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faculty. I came to know commerce is not

cup

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a cup

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of my tea I went in search of

diploma

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courses

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where

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and

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I came across the

diploma

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course

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in teaching. I found it quite interesting by looking at the pictures posted on the website and the listed activities which attracted me in a positive way. I contacted the college and got the proper information about the

course

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. I decided to take admission for the

Diploma

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course

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in ECCEd (

diploma

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in early

childhood

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care and

education

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) in which I came across many activities, I

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came to know about my hidden talents and the affection that I had for small kids which I was not aware of. Children are like small buds on the stem of a plant which flourishes or grows into

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apply

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beautiful flower later. And all

this

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growth totally depends upon a

teacher

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who shapes their

childhood

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by teaching them good things theoretically

as well as

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practically.

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course

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changed my personality in a positive manner and

also

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I became more

matured

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than earlier. I could feel the difference in me, how I was earlier and how I am today. As the days passed I started getting interacted with small children of the age group 3-6 a kind

innocence

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of innocence

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they have in their

behavior

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behaviour

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came across me and being with them I realized even I was getting back into my

childhood

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. That day I decided that I will become a kindergarten

teacher

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and

then

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I started

persuing

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pursuing

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courses

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such

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B.ed

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as B.ed

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and

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apply

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then

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in future I will be

persuing

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pursuing

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Masters

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master

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in Early

Childhood

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Care &

Education

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This

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will enhance my knowledge and

also

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I will get to know more about children

upto

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up to

the age group of

6and

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6 and

also

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about their

behavior

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, their development stages and many more.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

467 words

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FUTURE JOB, WHY I WANT TO BECOME A KINDERGARTEN TEACHER

Include an introduction and conclusion

Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Some people believe that the internet has made books and libraries obsolete. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Provide reason and support with examples.