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You have recently seen a job vacancy announcement on a school website for the post of assistant teacher. You would like to apply for the position.

#job #vacancy #announcement #school #website #post #assistant #teacher #position
Dear Sir, I am
student
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a student
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in
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pedagogical
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a pedagogical
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 university and I have read your
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advertisement
of
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 the unpaid job with juniors or more clear about work with local children and would like to get more information. I would be grateful if you give me some details about
this
 work.The information I would like to obtain should include the following: What document I should have? What are my responsibilities? And how many days of the week I should work? I would appreciate
if
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 you could inform me as soon as possible. I am free after
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, during the two
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,
on
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 Monday to Friday. And
i
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like
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 have practice with children. You could send the
above mentioned
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 information to my email. I look for art to receiving a prompt reply!
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Your
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 faithfully, John Milton
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