In the 21st century, many women have come out of their home to become what we call working women. What are the advantages and disadvantages of women joining the workforce?

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of

women

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have

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a job career. Many of them, especially young professionals, enjoy

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money.

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, there are pros and cons to

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before deciding to do

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essay, I will discuss why

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so popular

women

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for women

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working

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in

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companies and some of

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to be overcome. Let's begin by looking

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of the main

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advantages

, which is to receive

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a salary

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based on their working hours. By

this

I mean, females were not allowed to work in past,

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they use to depend

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men

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salaries and could not give

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in

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how to

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administrate

it. Nowadays, once employed they have the opportunity

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manage

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their profits.

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to say, it leads to

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independence.

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tasks which

women

make better. In the UK

for instance

, Child Care Centres are known because

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female teams who

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the business. Many professionals in

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area are mothers, so they are prepared to cope with many situations. The success of these establishments is related to the maternal care of teachers

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have

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deep experience in

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care of children. On the other side of the

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, housewives

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take part in

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the workforce

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commonly are stressed and tired.

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, they develop two roles, one at the company and

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managing their own houses.

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leads to depression or a sense of they are not productive. Another issue is that

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women

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low salary compared to men even in the same job position.

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this

reason

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some

women

have to work

in

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two jobs in order to raise their profits.

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is

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unfair competition. All

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things considered,

women

who decided to work face hard steps. It is necessary to weigh up

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the pros

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of making profits and the variety of job offers and the cons of

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problems or low salaries. Personally, I believe that the benefits of a career

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growth

, eventually outweigh any drawbacks.