Write a letter to the hotel manager praising a staff member. In your letter: •Explain the situation. •What they did •What do you want the manager to do?

Hello

Hotel

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Manager, I am writing

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letter to express my gratitude to your team member Peter, who pampered us with his above-par service.

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your property is one of the most expensive ones, we made up our minds to stay there considering the excellent

google

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Google

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reviews, and I must say it was the right decision. It justifies every penny I have spent. When we

check

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in, we were worried that the

hotel

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was

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located far from the city, as we were travelling with an infant and he may have special needs, but without mentioning

peter

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Peter

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made all the arrangements.

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, he put a bottle of milk in a mini fridge without any request,

arrange

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arranged

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a cradle at night, and

provide

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provided

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a stroller for an evening walk. I believe

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presence of mind deserved a reward

and

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we tried to tip him

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we were checking out, but as it is against

hotel

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policy, he

denied

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refused

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to accept it.

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, I am grateful for his service, and I want to reward him

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I have attached a cheque with

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letter. Can you please give it to him

with

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through

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the official channel as per

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policies? Regards, Jay Patel

Jay Patel

Feb 2, 2023

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grammar

Use past tense for the actions you tell of, and keep tenses the same.

structure

Make each idea on its own paragraph when you present a new point.

grammar

Fix small errors like 'denied to accept' to 'refused to accept' and 'is' to 'was' for a smoother read.

task

Be clear on what you want the manager to do, and note any hotel policy with care.

tone

Keep a polite and formal tone throughout.

policy

Avoid saying money as a gift; suggest a proper way to reward that fits policy.

content

Clear thank you to the staff for help with the baby.

structure

Greeting and closing are included.

tone

The letter shows a wish to reward the staff.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

199 words

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