The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The chart gives information on how the

percentage

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of

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population

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the population

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, who

were

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was

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born in Australia and abroad, living in cities,

towns

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or rural

areas

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changed over

15-year

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a 15-year

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period.

Overall

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, the main feature regards both

type

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types

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of citizens moving away from

towns

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and rural

areas

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, increasing the

percentage

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of

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population

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the population

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in

varies

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various

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cities of Australia.

It is clear that

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towns

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and remote villages witnessed a significant decrease in

population

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between 1995 and 2010.

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the

percentage

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of national-born living in rural

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in 1995 was slightly minor than foreign-born during the same year, 30% and 40% respectively, in 2010 the trend shifted in

favor

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favour

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of

people

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born in Australia. In fact, the

percentage

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decreased by 15% and 35% respectively. The

datas

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data

are quite different for

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towns

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town

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populations, where

people

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born in the country counted a marginal decrease

whereas

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people

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born outside stayed steady.

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, the upwards trend concerned only

people

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living in the cities. In 2010, the

population

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left

towns

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and villages to re-populate major metropolitan

areas

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. A

dramatical

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dramatic

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rise is shown by both

Australian born

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Australian-born

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and foreign to

a

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apply

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60% and 80% respectively.