The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The chart gives information on how the
percentage
of population
, who Add an article
the population
were
born in Australia and abroad, living in cities, Change the verb form
was
towns
or rural areas
changed over 15-year
period.
Add an article
a 15-year
Overall
, the main feature regards both type
of citizens moving away from Change to a plural noun
types
towns
and rural areas
, increasing the percentage
of population
in Add an article
the population
varies
cities of Australia.
Replace the word
various
It is clear that
towns
and remote villages witnessed a significant decrease in population
between 1995 and 2010. While
the percentage
of national-born living in rural areas
in 1995 was slightly minor than foreign-born during the same year, 30% and 40% respectively, in 2010 the trend shifted in favor
of Change the spelling
favour
people
born in Australia. In fact, the percentage
decreased by 15% and 35% respectively. The datas
are quite different for Correct your spelling
data
towns
populations, where Change the noun form
town
people
born in the country counted a marginal decrease whereas
people
born outside stayed steady.
However
, the upwards trend concerned only people
living in the cities. In 2010, the population
left towns
and villages to re-populate major metropolitan areas
. A dramatical
rise is shown by both Replace the word
dramatic
Australian born
and foreign to Add a hyphen
Australian-born
a
60% and 80% respectively.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, population, towns, areas, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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