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The table below gives information about the UK's top 5 exports in 2020 and the percentage change with the previous year. The bar chart shows the percentage of UK exports sent to the EU between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the UK's top 5 exports in 2020 and the percentage change with the previous year. The bar chart shows the percentage of UK exports sent to the EU between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data
on
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in
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 the table shows the highest five of
United
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the United
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 Kingdom’s products that
being
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are being
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 exported and their values in 2020, with the annual change
percentage
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 of each product. Under the table, there
are
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is
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also
Linking Words
 the bar chart that
provide
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provides
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 data from 2000 to 2020 about the
percentage
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 of
United
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the United
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 Kingdom’s
exports
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 that
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are being
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being
Wrong verb form
were
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 sent to
European
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the European
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 Union. The table shows that the top 5 goods exported from England in 2020 are cars, gold, turbojets, medication, and crude oil. The value of each product
ranging
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ranges
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 from $16.1 - $26.8 billion, with the maximum value obtained by cars.
However
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, the annual change
percentage
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 shows that the top 5
exports
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 mostly have
been
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apply
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decreased. Only the medication products
that
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apply
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increased their sale from 2019 to 2020, with
the
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a
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 1.6
percent
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per cent
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 change. It
also
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 can be seen through the bar chart that the
percentage
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 of England’s
exports
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 to
the
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apply
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European countries
was decrease
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decreased
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 continuously every 5
year
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years
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since
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from
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 2000 until 2020.
While
Linking Words
 the 2000 and 2005’s total
exports
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still
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were still
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 above 50
percent
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per cent
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, the 2010 – 2020 total
exports
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 decreased to under 50
percent
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per cent
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, exports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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