The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart is a statistical representation of the variable proportion of time spent by people in various fields like working, sleeping, travelling for work, other interest or playing sports, Relaxing at home, and going out with family or friends from 1958 to 2008.
Overall
, the sleeping habits of adults were higher before which changed and decreased as time went on.
While
rest all the habits has been increased by some per cent by the time. In the
year
1958, 33% of adults were working, which outward by 42% in the
year
2008, 8% of the people enjoyed relaxing at home in 1958, which increased by 5% in the
year
2008. When we talk about the travelling habit, in the
year
1958 only 2% population travelled for work and in 2008 it increased by 6%. 19% crowd likes to go out with friends and family in the
year
1958, which decreased by 13%. In the
year
2008, 8% of pupils enjoyed playing sports or other activities, same when compared with the
year
1958 it decreased by 2%. The only habit that didn't see a surplus in the
year
2008 was the sleeping habit of adults, which was 25% and when we focused on the
year
1958 it was more as 32%.
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