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The chats below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The pie charts illustrate the consumption of
water
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 for various aims in 6 continents of the world, namely industrial, agricultural, and domestic goals.
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, the majority of
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the water
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 used for industrial purposes is done by developed countries,
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 developing continents consume
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 mostly for agricultural reasons.
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 the diagrams, the highest proportion of industrial use of
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 belongs to Europe,
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 Central
Asia
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 spends 5% of whole
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 in their industry. In comparison,
Asia
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 has the highest percentage of
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 utilization for agriculture among other areas with %88,
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 with 32%, European countries become the lowest
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 consumers in food production. Europe and North America have the highest percentage of
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 expenditure for industrial goals with 53% and 48% respectively. Africa,
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, Central
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, and South East
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 share a similar proportion for agricultural utilization which compose the top three among all regions.  It can be observed that Central
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 and South East
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 share the same level for domestic use which is 7%.
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, South America shows the highest percentage of it.
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