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college account bank credit requerid what international student

#college #account #bank #credit #requerid #student
I am an international student,
I
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and I
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will start my program in May, I paid for my first
semester
 but I am processing a
credit
 in my country with ICETEX
institution
 for my second
semester
,
this
institution
 required your number account bank to realize the transfer when be approved my
credit
 I am
international
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an international
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 student,
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and i
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i
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I
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 will start my program
on
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in
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 May,
i
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I
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 paid
my
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for my
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 first
semester
 but
i
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I
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 am processing a
credit
 in my country with ICETEX
institution
 for my second
semester
,
this
institution
 required your number account bank
for
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to
show examples
 realize
transfer
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the transfer
show examples
 when be approved my
credit
 I am
international
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an international
show examples
 student,
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and i
show examples
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
 will start my program
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
 May,
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
 paid
my
Change preposition
for my
show examples
 first
semester
 but
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
 am processing a
credit
 in my country with ICETEX
institution
 for my second
semester
,
this
institution
 required your number account bank
for
Change preposition
to
show examples
 realize
transfer
Correct article usage
the transfer
show examples
 when be approved my
credit
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