The map below is of town of Garldson, a new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of town of Garldson, a new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map shows the plan of two potential
are
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is
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to
built
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build
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a new
supermaket
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supermarket
in a town called Garldson.
It is clear that
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both
potential
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will have some advantages and disadvantages.
Overall
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, the new establishment will
benefits
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not only
people
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the people
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of Garldson but
also
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nearby
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the nearby
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towns The first proposal was to
built
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a
supermaket
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supermarket
on
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in
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the countryside.
This
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will definitely will not add to the
build up
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of traffic in the city. These
place
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also
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are also
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only
a
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apply
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12 km from another town which might attract more buyers. Residents of Garldson will need to travel specifically for shopping which might not be ideal for some.
On the other hand
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, the
planned
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for the other potential area was in the town centre. The benefits to attract Garland residents
is
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high especially if they
already
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are already
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in the local area.
However
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,
this
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will not help the flow of traffic in the area.
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