You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagrams illustrate how residential areas are protected from
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flood
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the flood
a flood
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.
Overall
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, there are two ways to safeguard housing
building
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buildings
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in
flood
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areas, with or without a stopbank. Both solutions consider historical data
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the former is an extension of the latter. In the first solution, buildings' floor levels are elevated from the ground to the freeboard level which is 300mm from the past
100 year
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100-year
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flood
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level. As an extended solution, a stopbank
is build
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is built
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near the riverbank from the ground to the freeboard level. Its main objective is to act as a blocker for the
flood
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that is
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triggered by the increment in the riverbank, consisting of two main components a berm, and a floodgate. Despite blocking the water coming in from the river, internal rainfall could not flow out too. The
existences
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existence
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of a berm and a floodgate solve
this
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problem partially by releasing the internal outflow into the river ,
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however
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there will still be minor internal ponding on the mainland.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words flood with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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