You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagrams illustrate how residential areas are protected from
Use synonyms
flood
.
Add an article
the flood
a flood
Overall
, there are two ways to safeguard housing Linking Words
building
in Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
flood
areas, with or without a stopbank. Both solutions consider historical data Use synonyms
while
the former is an extension of the latter.
In the first solution, buildings' floor levels are elevated from the ground to the freeboard level which is 300mm from the past Linking Words
100 year
Add a hyphen
100-year
flood
level.
As an extended solution, a stopbank Use synonyms
is build
near the riverbank from the ground to the freeboard level. Its main objective is to act as a blocker for the Change the verb form
is built
is building
flood
Use synonyms
that is
triggered by the increment in the riverbank, consisting of two main components a berm, and a floodgate. Despite blocking the water coming in from the river, internal rainfall could not flow out too. The Linking Words
existences
of a berm and a floodgate solve Fix the agreement mistake
existence
this
problem partially by releasing the internal outflow into the river ,Linking Words
Linking Words
however
there will still be minor internal ponding on the mainland.Add a comma
,however
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