The chart below shows the total numbers of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories from 1995 to 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates how long the British people call, categorised into three call types mobile call was less than 5
Loal
(fixed line), national and international(fixed line), and Mobile (all calls) between 1995 and 2002. The unit is of Correct your spelling
local
billions
Add the preposition
ofbillions
minutes
. It can be clearly seen that the total minutes
of local calls was
the largest in the given period.
The British people called by local fixed line for more than 70 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
billion
minutes
in 1995. The total minutes
of local calls had increased and peaked at 90 billion
minutes
in 1999. After that, the local call utilized less and less and the number of minutes
was the same level as the first year
in 2002.
On the contrary
, there were a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
increase
Replace the word
increased
trends
in the other two types of calls continuously over the given period. Change preposition
in trends
The national
and international call was about 45 Correct article usage
National
billion
minutes
andAdd an article
the
a
billion
in 1995. The national and international call
had increased slightly Fix the agreement mistake
calls
year
by year
, reached at just over 60 billion
in the last
year
. As for mobile calls, it was about 10 billion
in 1998, which was less than national and international calls by 40 billion
minutes
. There was a dramatic rose from 1999 and reached the highest point of 45 billion
minutes
in 2002, but, it was the least call type used in the UK.Submitted by miku.love15 on
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