The charts below show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate the percentages of English pupils in a college in the United Kingdom who know foreign

languages

over a period of ten years.

Overall

, the percentage of speaking a second

language

in a college increased throughout the given time in the question.

Moreover

, Spanish was the most spoken

language

among university students in both years.

According to

the first diagram, in 2000, Spanish had the highest percentage which was 30%,

while

German and two other

languages

were the least spoken by young adults.(both were 10%) French and another

language

share the same proportion, and together they comprise %30 of all speakers. In 2010, French and German together were spoken by %20 of the university population and the same amount of people spoke these

languages

. Spanish speakers and students who speak another

language

increased in ten years to reach 35% and 20% respectively. In comparison, French speakers and people who do not speak any second

languages

decreased by 5% and 10%,

while

teenagers who know German remained stable.

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