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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given is a figure comparing the percentage of
women
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 and
men
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 passing their driving
test
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 in one country from the period 1980 to 2010.
Overall
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, the passing
rate
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 of
women
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 is significantly higher than
men
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, and the passing
rate
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 steadily grew from 1980 to 2000 for both genders. In 1980, 48% of the female examinees qualified for the
test
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, and the passing
rate
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 slightly grew to 52% in 1990. An exponential growth was shown in 2000, with an approximate
rate
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 of 68%. The qualifying proportion
then
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 slightly fell to 64% in 2010. As for
men
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, the qualifying
rate
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 never surpasses half of the proportion. Around 28% of the male participants passed the
test
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 in 1980, and their performances almost improved with a 10% growth in 1990. The numbers reached the peak with 49% of
men
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 passing the
test
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 in 2000 and remained at the exact same
rate
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 in 2010. The gap in passing rates between
women
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 and
men
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 sustained at 15% to 20% during the given time period, with
women
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 continue leading the performance.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men, test, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Pass rate
  • Driving test
  • Trend
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Milestone
  • Comparison
  • Significant difference
  • Broad social changes
  • Policy changes
  • Surpass
  • Reflect
  • Implications
  • Disparity
  • Overall trends
  • Summarize
  • Statistical data
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