The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the revenue from 5 different industries,
as well as
the percentage of fluctuation in values from 2015 to 2016.
Overall
, it is apparent that Gems and jewellery's export earnings is
the only sector that witnessed a reduction in Change the verb form
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value
, whereas
that of the other fields all increased.
Petroleum and engineered goods had the highest value
in 2015, around 61 and 58 billion dollars
, respectively. By the following years, both of them had climbed up slightly by 3% for the former and 8,5% for the latter. Gems and jewellery generated around 43 billion dollars
in 2015, but it immediately saw a 5.18% decrease, making its value
dropped
to 41 Wrong verb form
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billon
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billion
dollars
in 2016.
Regarding to
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last
two categories, agricultural products and textiles had similar
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a similar
pattern
as they both climbed up in export Fix the agreement mistake
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value
in 2016. However
, while
agricultural goods only winessed
a minimal growth of just 0.81%, textiles had the biggest percentage change in Correct your spelling
witnessed
value
in all of the industires
, at 15.24%. Correct your spelling
industries
industry
Nonetheless
, the revenue of these two sectors was nearly the same, at approximately 32 billiond
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billion
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in 2016.Submitted by loanqnu97 on
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