Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued by some that it is essential to choose a high-wage
job
even though it doesn’t appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with
this
opinion and think that it is better to put
satisfaction
at work as the first priority when choosing a
job
instead
of being interested solely in high-salary pay.
Firstly
, I believe that
job
satisfaction
provides us with happiness that no money can guarantee. Even if someone receives a high revenue, they may not get a feeling of fulfilment and
feels
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burned out easily.
For example
, I used to work as a student trainee in the strategy division
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a random system of
university
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. I felt burned out all the time for 2 months because I am not passionate about
this
field.
Although
I earned a lot of income from being a trainee, I didn't proud to be there at all. That's why I believe it is more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy than to look only at a high salary.
Secondly
, doing something that you are passionate about can bring you success in career growth because you will be more productive when you do the
job
with your real
passion
.
This
passion
relates to
job
satisfaction
and can drive you to reach your goal more easily than doing the
job
with a high wage.
As a result
, it could give you a good opportunity in the future, which can be more worthwhile than a high salary.
For instance
, in my country, some restaurant owners left their jobs, which gave them a high
wage
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and stability in their life, because they wanted to follow their dream. Nobody believes that today they become the top billionaires in Thailand and the revenue they earn is much more than their beforehand income.
Thus
, the jobs that match
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your real
passion
outweigh the drawback of the risk
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income in a long-term perspective. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
job
satisfaction
is more beneficial than a high salary because it makes people happy and working with real
passion
makes them productive and can reach their goals easily.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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