The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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pie charts illustrate the percentage of Briton
students
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at
one
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institution in the UK who have the ability to speak foreign
languages
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between 2000 and 2010.
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, in both years, the majority of British
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in
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university were able to speak Spanish the most,
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they had the qualification to speak other
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in a relatively balanced proportion. In 2000, around
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-third of
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in England spoke Spanish as opposed to 10% of
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groups of British
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who can speak
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languages
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and can speak only German. There were
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foreign
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that
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were able to speak in the same proportions (15%), with
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French and another
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international
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.
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, 20% of Britain
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couldn’t speak other linguistics, being the second largest group on the chart.
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,
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in 2010,
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who can speak Spanish still at the largest contribution,
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who can speak another foreign language were higher than those in 2000.
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, there was an increase in the group of
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who have the ability to speak
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other
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, increasing from 10% in 2000 to 15 % in 2010. For the remaining
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, they were able to speak French and German about 10% in each language. And another 10% of British
pupils
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hadn’t had the ability to speak any other language except English, decreasing in the percentage compared with 2000.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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