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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The given chart illustrates the value of a certain country’s exports in five product categories during the period between 2015 and 2016, and the other table indicates the proportion changes in
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values
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the values
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 of exports in each category in 2016 in comparison with 2015. Information is shown for five specific categories; Petroleum
products
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, Engineered
goods
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, Gems and jewellery, Agricultural
products
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, and
Textiles
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. Looking at the
overall
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 perspectives, it is readily apparent that in both years, the export earnings in petroleum were the highest, and Engineered
goods
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also
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 showed
the
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 similar figure in 2016.
In addition
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,
according to
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 the table, the rate of
values
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 in all
products
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 showed an upward trend except for Gems and jewellery. Petroleum
products
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 always earned the highest
values
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 given two years,
while
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Textiles
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 showed a significantly lower figure than other
products
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.
Furthermore
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, the export earnings of Agricultural
products
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 in 2015 and 2016 were almost
same
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the same
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the
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as the
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 figure
of
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for
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textiles
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 in 2016. When it comes to the percentage changes in
values
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, the proportion of Gems and jewellery slightly decreased,
whereas
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 the figures
of
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 other
goods
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 quite increased. Meanwhile, there was the largest increase in
Textiles
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, and the proportion of Engineered
goods
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 showed the second largest change.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words values, products, goods, textiles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • percentage change
  • compare
  • trends
  • changes
  • chart
  • table
  • overview
  • introduce
  • highlight
  • describe
  • summarize
  • information
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