Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environtment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
The Internet has deeply pervaded our daily lives, with its emerging conspicuous advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, the decline of face-to-face contact has provided the disabled with more working opportunities; on the other hand, the decrease in immediate contact is compromising people's ability to deal with confrontations.
in today's world, most people think we have too many options. technology and the internet have created many choices for us. I agree with this point of view that it has more advantages than disadvantages.
It is a common belief that imposing new taxes on manufacturing firms would reduce air pollution; meanwhile, there are others who believe in using clever strategies for reduction. I will discuss both views, and personally, I am against the idea of taxation to prevent pollution.
Environment-related issues have always been a hot and controversial topic among societies, especially, in this particular era. Moreover, some argue that the extinction of some species of creatures is the primary environmental matter, whereas others don’t believe so. In this essay, I comply with the latter opinion, and therefore, I will be clarifying two sides in the upcoming points.
To begin with , there are many excellent reasons for exercising several times each week . First , people who exercise look better . Exercise is important to keep our bodies in good shape . In addition , people who exercise have more energy . for example , a Pearson who exercises can walk up stairs , and climb hills more easily . People who exercise have a healthier heart , too. Finally , exercise reduces stress and helps you have a clear mind . Too much stress can you to worry a lot , and that is not good for your health . For these reasons , if you want to improve your health, you should exercise regularly .