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The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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 bar graph illustrates the information regarding the quota of boys and girls
students
are
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studying different subjects of computer
science
 at US
institute
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 in 2011.
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,it is
cleared
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 that
average
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 number of males are more interested in studying
in
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Psychology,Natural
Science
 and Mathematics.
However
,females are only interested in Natural
Science
 at US
university
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.
Firstly
,more
then
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 50
research
 learners of Mens
were
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studied Linguistics.
Therefore
,Women were
high
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 average of study in
same
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 course.
Secondly
,Psychological
research
students
 of male were studied
highest
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 ratio of 150
as well as
female
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the female
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 side of
same
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 field were exactly 200.Weather in the
research
 student of Natural
Science
 both boy and girls are similar average.
On the other
hand
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womens
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women's
women
 whoes studied engineering of lesser
then
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 100
research
students
.
Moreover
,
Mens
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men
 were
highly
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research
student
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students
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 in Engineering,Programming around 150.
However
,in the subject of programming female were 70 average
research
students
as
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male
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were reach
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at
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200
students
research
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 in Mathematics.In the
last
womens
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women
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 did very less student
research
 in
same
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 curriculum in the year
of
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2001.
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