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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Women
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’s position has evolved in different societies over the past 50 years.
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,
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 equality has not been achieved
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 the existence of unequal
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conditions
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 and unequal distribution of household duties. Nowadays,
women
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 do not have the same
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conditions
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 as men doing the same tasks and having the same position in the company.
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, their salaries are usually lower than other colleagues, resulting in
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 inequality.
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, they do not usually have equal opportunities to get a high
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 position in the company.
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,
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 issue is present in some businesses where all relevant positions belong to male employees.
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conditions
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,
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 as salaries, holidays, or rights should be the same for those who work in the same stage of the company. Looking at domestic responsibilities, it is well known that
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 distribution is far away in some houses to be divided equally. Traditionally,
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 were the people in charge of household duties,
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 as cooking, doing the laundry, and taking care of children. Currently,
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 repartition is still unequal, leading to a superiority of men over
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.
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, if these responsibilities were equally distributed,
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 and men could enjoy their leisure time doing their hobbies,
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 as reading, watching movies or exercising.
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, until domestic responsibilities are not equally distributed,
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 equality will not be possible.
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, I believe that different
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conditions
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 among the workers because of their
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 and the unequal distribution of household duties make it difficult to achieve
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 equality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • historical context
  • gender pay gap
  • underrepresentation
  • leadership roles
  • gender-based violence
  • educational opportunities
  • workforce
  • legal reforms
  • statistics
  • case studies
  • global perspective
  • progressive changes
  • cultural differences
  • empowerment
  • patriarchy
  • systemic discrimination
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