A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 years old watch television and/or play video game too much. How does the problem affect? What measures can be taken to control it?

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that many students from 7
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11 years old do many
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screen
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television and
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play
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video
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the
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effect
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daily
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point of view. There are many
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about
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. One of the biggest
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doing too much
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because they will give up their rest
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to watch television or play
video
games. It will affect their schedule not only at home but
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at
school
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it will impact
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their
health
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their
school
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on
time
, because they are so immerging in playing
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.
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video
games
also
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about
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and as a media for stress relief for
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. As a
parent
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we want our kids to do well at
school
, but
also
have a healthy lifestyle. To prevent the bad effect
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too much
screen
time
,
firstly
parent
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should make a schedule for
screen
time
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, kids can play
video
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games
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or watch television after they make
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a parent
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parent
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can ask
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kid to
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exercise together
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the weekend so they will have physical
activity
to maintain their
health
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health
and their
school
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also
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stress relief.
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cannot
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screen
time
, but have to make
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of
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it so kids still can do their hobbies
while
not
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their
health
and
school
life.
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