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Youth drug abuse is a serious problem. What are the possible causes of this behaviour? Do you have any suggestion to control that?

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Drug addiction among young people is the most concern in many countries. The issue stems from a number of causes to several solutions will be proposed in
this
 essay. The mentioned problem can be driven by several factors. One of the main causes of
this
 trend is the popularity of negative media with the appearance of the Internet. To be more specific, with the development of technology, teens can
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easily accessible for
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website
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 with unhealthy content on them.
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, it is not difficult for children to watch some scenes having adults using
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drug
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, and they can resort to immense because they are not still aware of whether these activities are harmful to them.
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, with immense the amount of pressure related
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 and extra-curricular activities, teens may be using drugs or stimulants in order to meet the expectations of their parents or teachers. There are various viable remedies to help deal with
this
 issue. The foremost solution is
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 parents should
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 more time caring for
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 to avoid them accessing with drawbacks of the Internet.
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, to prevent using drugs, people can find other ways to handle stress and unwind
such
 as taking up exercising,
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 a good book or sharing pressures with relatives. Anything positive and relaxing
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 take the mind off using drugs
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