The Pie Charts illustrate the proportion of staff involved in three types of jobs in two different towns between 1960 and 2010.
Overall
, the graphs demonstrate that the people who worked in the manufacturing field for both towns were high in numbers in the 60s. Linking Words
However
, service sectors were admired by many in the next fifty years.
To start with, the data about the first Linking Words
town
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of
the charts shows that in 1960, the area of manufacturing as a profession was chosen by a huge number of people. Change preposition
on
Whereas
in that year 41% of total Linking Words
employments
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employment
were
dominated by the field, the numbers significantly decreased and only 20%were involved in the occupation in 2010. A notable rise was observed in Correct subject-verb agreement
was
town
A in the field of services and where there was only 29% of employees were working, the percentage was augmented Use synonyms
in
64%.
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to
In contrast
, Where in Linking Words
town
A the number of staff decreased drastically from 30 to 16 per cent, a slight growth was noted in Use synonyms
town
B and the amount increased Use synonyms
20
to 22 per cent. Change preposition
from 20
Although
in the second Linking Words
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town
the services sectors got a boost Add a comma
,town
by
10% to 25%, labour works dropped Change preposition
from
in
70 to 58 per cent from 1960 to 2010.
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from
To conclude
, in 2010, the dominating job sector in Linking Words
town
A was replaced by services, Use synonyms
whereas
the manufacturing area was the most Linking Words
preincreasn
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reincrease
town
B.Use synonyms
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